ok so this is the one that won the thingy...

this is the poem that won some poetry thing which was actually aimed to make money off me but i have no money for them to scam
thus
they failed

anyways so its not gonna be absolutly amazing
but i like it

and by the way its not in any real form
so its not like rhyming every 2 lines or whatever
no real timing thing
its just a really open poem
thingy
although i did originally write it as lyrics
so it can be either i spose
anywa
enjoy
=)

oh and if you can think of any other titles that'd fit i'd appreciate it
i'm never goot with labeling things





Treacherous Words, Unfaithful Thoughts, Broken Hearts

And to think I was confused
And to think I thought you loved me
That you meant it when you said you loved me
To think of the guilt I felt
When I said I didn’t love you back
And the thought I thought I hurt you
And your persistence to have me
To think I thought I may have been wrong
I thought I might have loved you
But now I know not to doubt intuition
Never think to doubt my intuition



thats the bit i like
dunno why
but i like it better than other stuff i've done
but
then there's the second verse which goes...



The thought she thought you loved her
What do you think?
Who did you think to tell the truth to?
Or did you think to do that at all?
I know you’re thinking to tell me I was the one
That got the truth from you
Even as you think to tell her she was
You think to tell us both we were she
But you thought to think to late
I’m already gone
And so is she
You’re alone with your thoughts
Your sick sorry sad thoughts
And don’t think you were able to hurt me
I’m not hurt I’m angry
And now I think to hurt you
I think I’ve thought it through
But I don’t ever want to see you again
So take your thoughts
I don’t care about them anymore
You
Are
Alone


but i don't like that verse as much
and does anyone recognise the "sick sorry sad thoughts" bit?
cause i think my mind stole it from somewhere...
i just like have a strange feeling it did...
but yeah...

so what'd you think?
i like the first verse but the second one sort of just trails
i think i originally meant it as lyrics and the first bit would be sung and the second bit would just be screamed
and then alone would be just said
i think
but it was so long ago...