All Alone on the Palestinian Front

raves +6   by Jen**GPAC**
I respect the rights for you to express all of your opinions so I hope you'll respect mine.. I have been pro palestinian for years.. and because of this I happened to come upon this one true story about a young girl who went to visit the Palestinian people for the peace corps.. she didn't meet a bunch of terrorists like the Bush peeps would like you to think.. she met a group of folks..who showed her the utmost acceptance and hospitality.. although they had very little left.. she decided to stand up for these people and I wrote a lil poem depicting what happened to her because of her choice.. keep in mind this is all true...



I've seen the few emails

saved by censored hands

of how you dared

though young and scared

to travel to far off lands

not knowing how the waring

world stands

You've befriended an infamous

population

according to the evening news

You've founded the truth

without manipulation

of a suffering community

with less to gain

with a whole lot more to loose

You've seen the noose

around necks of men, women and children

whose only crime is to presevere

You've stuck it out with those

people who accepted you

through poverty

through bloodshed

through trial and fear

you had a lot of promise

closer to your family and home

What drove you to wander

to the direct path of danger

to an end of pain

helpless and alone

You must have a will of steele

to have a faith in hospitable

strangers

while dwelling in the closing

walls of their ghetto

You've stuck up for all of those

like they were your brothers and

sisters

Tell me, dear child

what flashes of your short life

flashed before you

as the wheels, three stories tall,

crushed the soil before your eyes

Tell me, sweet girl

what unwavering will do you possess

to surrender your promises of the

future

to surrender between metal, rubber

...earth and grass

were you being wise

as eternal sleep overtook your eyes

I hope paradise remembers you

better than the self

inflicted blindness of the

prime time news
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  • raves     [-] by loky
    I have never understood why they have been fighting over a little piece of desert for years. Little stupid to me. Hell let them have it. All I can figure is there must be a little oil on it. That seems to start a war before human rights or anything else more important than that. Its a damn shame. Look at Darfur. You want to go to war over something? Now this would be a good reason. The Iraq war is about 20 years to late. Thats when Sadam gassed his own people.
  • raves +3   [-] by Nina ~COB
  • raves +2   [-] by Jen**GPAC**
    Aww thanks for the raves.. and being an awesome SH buddy..
    aww raves awesome sh buddy
  • raves +4   [-] by Mollydolly
    I am rendered totally melted. I too have always championed the Palistinians. Has always felt like they got such a raw deal. It's a shame when one groups gets so involved with their own history and pain that they cannot see that other's share the same kind of feelings and grief and love of life and family.

    Thanks again Jen for making me feel and making me thing.-that would be think history pain share feelings grief love life family jen feel
  • raves +2   [-] by Jen**GPAC**
    You're welcome and thanks for being a good buddy..
    buddy
  • raves +1   [-] by Mollydolly
    aw shucks taint nothin' Easy with you
  • raves +1 -1 [-] by Art
    I am pro-Palestinian too.

    I would love to see them free from the homicidal thugs of Hamas and Fatah.

    "she didn't meet a bunch of terrorists like the Bush peeps would like you to think"

    I don't remember Bush or his 'peeps' ever calling Palestinian people 'a bunch of terrorists'. But you do admit there is an active presence of terrorists in Gaza and the West Bank?
  • raves +1   [-] by Jen**GPAC**
    Heck no..as I said.. I respect your right to express your opinion.. but don't be all huffy when I share mine.
  • raves   -1 [-] by Art
    You don't think there is an active presence of terrorists in Gaza and the West Bank?
  • raves     [-] by Jen**GPAC**
    What I think is that this isn't the place for you to get on your soap box
  • raves   -1 [-] by Art
    This is SodaHead right?
  • raves     [-] by Jen**GPAC**
    Yes.. and if you are going to act as though you "own" it.. I have the right to block you.. consider it done..
  • raves +1   [-] by Darkest Burning Star
    Jen,

    With all due respect, I think maybe you overreacted a little to Art's question, even after he agreed that the Palestinian PEOPLE aren't terrorists. He only asked if you believed Hamas and Fatah were terrorists. I scrutinize comments closely, and he didn't come across as "owning" SH.

    He didn't come on here making fun of you or yelling "you're wrong", so I think the block is more than a little extreme. I hope you don't get offended by me saying this. I neither agree nor disagree with you about the Palestinian situation. I know someone who lives over there, so I get occasional updates on the situation and there is right and wrong on both sides.

    Again, I hope you don't get offended by me saying all this. I like you. I'm not defending Art personally, I just don't see the point in blocking people unless they are abusive.
  • raves +3   [-] by Saoirse~STPS~YWC~NO PALIN FVMA
    BRAVO! What a beautiful poem! I love it!

    Glad to see I'm not the only one on here that is Pro-Palestine.
    bravo beautiful poem love glad pro-palestine
  • raves +2   [-] by Jen**GPAC**
    Thanks.. and
  • raves +2   [-] by Fluffy
    if I was a christian I'd say Amen, but I'm not so I'll just tell you that I love this.
  • raves +3   [-] by Jen**GPAC**
    Heck I am no longer Christian and i say Amen all the time.. thanks Fluffy.. I might get a little flack for this.. but.. like always.. I won't really care.. :X
  • raves +1   [-] by Fluffy
    haha. People shouldn't flack you for this, if they do it just shows everybody that they're brainwashed, AND blind -_-
    FREE PALESTINE!
  • raves +4   [-] by Tom
    Was this a tribute to Rachel Corrie?

    This is beautiful no matter what.
  • raves +3   [-] by Jen**GPAC**
    I think so.. OMG.. I had the flyer somewhere.. and I couldn't find it.. thanks for the info.. and the kind words.. :))